Week 14 Story: Rapunzel for the Cure

Rapunzel's mother was an evil, wretched women. She didn't have Rapunzel's best interests in mind and kept her locked up in her tower where she was unable to escape from. One day, she gets so mad at Rapunzel and chops off her long, golden blonde braids. Rapunzel was devastated because she loved her hair so very much and it was the only thing that really set her apart from other girls. She was feeling sad, confused and more alone then ever in her tower that basically doubled as a jail cell. 

One morning she was having her own personal pity party when she realized there was more she could do make her life better. Not only that, she wanted to make the lives of other better as well. She was determined to find a way to sneak out of the tower forever and never planned to see her mother again. She spent many longs nights plotting how she would escape. Eventually she found a way to hook one of her braids (now detached from her head) to a hook on the ceiling. She waited until it was getting dark outside because she knew her mother would be going to sleep soon. She always claimed she had to fall asleep the moment it got dark to get a full night of beauty rest, and believe me she needed it. Rapunzel always hoped all this beauty rest would give her some inner beauty because that was something the woman had none of. When she felt the time was right, just as the sun disappeared and the moon started to shine bright, Rapunzel opened the window and let the braid down. It reached almost all the way to the ground outside and she carefully shimmied down, carrying the second braid in her hand. She was going to need it later. When she got to the bottom, she dropped into the bushes and yanked the long hair look from the hook. Before she climbed down she strung a few strands through the windowsill so she could yank it back shut to make it less noticeable that she was gone. Rapunzel used a sharp rock to cut the remaining hair off of the window and ran far far away until she felt it was safe to stop. 

She felt so happy and free for the first time in her life. Rapunzel felt like she had the whole world in her hands and her possibilities were endless. But for some reason, she still didn't feel like her mission was complete. 

Rapunzel woke early the very next morning and made her way to the hospital. Although it seems like an unlikely first place to visit after spending several years locked up in a dungeon-like tower, Rapunzel knew exactly what she was doing. She approached the lady at the front desk and asked where she could find the cancer patients going through chemotherapy. She led her towards the cancer center and Rapunzel got down to business. She found all of the patients that had already lost their hair and divided up her long braids among all of them. Rapunzel even died and styled each woman's hair they well they felt the most beautiful. All of the patients were glowing with happiness and smiling from ear to ear. Rapunzel's deed gave so many patients beautiful, healthy wigs until their real hair could grow back. She continued to grow out her own hair and donate it to someone else each time it got long enough. 

(Image from: Deviant Art)

Bibliography: Fairy Tales by the Brothers Grimm

Author's Note: In the original story of Rapunzel, she escapes the tower she is trapped in mainly to spend the rest of her life with a handsome prince charming. The whole point of the story is that they overcame an obstacle together and spent the rest of their lives living happily ever after. Since it has a pretty generic ending, I decided to put a twist on how the story goes. I get tired of reading so many fairy tales where the women are so determined to find love, so I wanted to create a story with a girl who had goals to simply help others. I kept a lot of the story similar because I used the same characters and setting, but I just changed what happens in the end. Cancer is something that really hits home with me so when I was thinking of good things Rapunzel could do for others, it seemed like a perfect solution. I think of this story as more of a recreation of the original, not a sequel. Although Rapunzel doesn't run off into the sunset with a handsome man, I think leaving a bunch of cancer patients with smiles on their face is just as great. 

Reading Notes Week 14, Grimm Part 2

The Queen Bee: In this story, there is a King with two tall, grown sons and one dwarf son. The two older ones think the dwarf isn't capable of much, but throughout the story his big heart causes him to save the lives of animals and bugs instead of killing them. In the end it benefits him because the bugs and animals help him with his life tasks.

The Twelve Huntsmen: In this story, a King leaves his wife to go see his sick, dying father. When he saw his father, he told his son who he wanted him to marry and then died. The King's daughter asked for 11 other girls that looked exactly like her. They dressed up all the girls as huntsmen, but the lions can tell they are actually girls in disguise. In the end, the King finds the girl he had originally left at the beginning and leaves his new wife for her. 

(Illustration by Walter Crane)

Bibliography: Fairy Tales by Brothers Grimm

Week 14 Reading Notes: Grimm, Part 1

The Frog Prince: In this story a Princess loses her golden ball and a frog says if she lets him live with her and eat with her he will return the ball. She says to return the ball and then he can stay with her. When he fetches her the ball, she instead runs off and leaves him behind. The frog speaks with rhyming poems when he comes to her door to live with her. After three nights, the Princess wakes up to a handsome Prince and she realizes she broke his curse. He takes her home to marry her and they live happily ever after. 

Rapunzel: Although Rapunzel had a rough life, the story ends happily. The man comes to see her every day in the tower she is trapped in and her caregiver finds out and doesn't let him come back. He falls out of the tower into the bushes and is blinded by the thorns. When Rapunzel eventually escapes her castle her tears clear up the mans eyes and he is able to see clearly again. 

(Illustration by Walter Crane)

Bibliography: Fairytales by the Brother's Grimm 

Week 13 Storytelling: The Little Mermaid Sequel

Ariel and the Prince were as happy as ever. She had moved into his glorious mansion, her humanity was in tact forever, and the Prince loved her more than anything in the world. Of course she headed out to the sea in her husbands yacht to visit her beloved father and siblings in the ocean. They always smiled and were happy to see her, but she knew deep down her siblings were a little jealous of her new lifestyle. They had always envied her beauty, but now they had the fact that she had two working legs and a gorgeous husband to add to their list. 

Ariel wasn't just stopping by the ocean for fun today, this time she had big news to tell her family. "Daddy, guess what?!" exclaimed Ariel. "We're having a baby!" 

Her father's face turned red with rage. "How dare you give birth to a human, Ariel," he said. "What a disgrace." 

Ariel hurried home, sobbing, not expecting this reaction from her family. She figured they would be happy for her, she was finally living out the life she always imagined. Life under the sea may be for them, but she wanted to stay on land forever. She decided it was best to not tell the Prince about the horrible reaction from her family. She continued staying strong through the pregnancy, but deep down she was depressed and angry at her family. Over time, she grew weaker and not healthy by the end of the pregnancy. Her spirits were down and the Prince did everything he could to make her feel better. She couldn't keep food down, she was pale and her eyes were dark with sleep deprivation. 

When she finally went into labor, she wished more than anything for the support of her family. She felt so alone and abandoned, even though she knew how much her husband loved and cared for her. Ariel was lying in the hospital bed, sweating and holding back tears when the doctor came in and handed her a message in a bottle. She knew the only person who would send this form of a message was from under the sea so she rushed to open it. 

We'll love you forever and we can't wait to meet the beautiful new baby. She is going to be gorgeous and driven just like her mother. 

Love,

Dad

Ariel wept with joy and immediately felt better. She gave her husband a big hug and easily delivered her baby girl. The happy couple couldn't wait until the baby was old enough to bring out to see to meet her grandparents. They raised their baby on land, but taught her so much about where her mom was from. The little girl was so intrigued by the ocean, so they spent most of their free time going to the beach. When the girl was just 4 years old, they took her deep into the depths of the ocean to meet the rest of her family. 

(Illustration from: W. Health Robinson)

Bibliography: The Little Mermaid by Hans Christian Anderson

Author's Note: As I finished reading The Little Mermaid for Week 13, I realized a sequel would be fitting for the story since it kind of ends with a cliff hanger and we don't really know what will happen next for Ariel and her Prince. The Little Mermaid ends with the Prince falling in love and marrying Ariel, who would now be able to remain human for the rest of her life. She is sad about the sacrifices she has made and is given the choice to kill the Prince to become a mermaid again. She is too loving to do such a deed and chooses not to. My sequel isn't and exact fit from what happens in the end of the original story, but I was using my imagination and wanted Ariel and the Prince to have a child. I figured her father's reaction would be much like I depicted it if they were to actually have a baby. Ariel has some struggles in my story, but it ends well with her whole family having her back. They are able to raise their child with no drama in the family and she doesn't miss being a mermaid because she loves her new life so much. I had fun creating my own addition to my favorite childhood movie.

Reading Notes Week 13: Fairy Tales & Stories by Hans Christian Anderson, Part 2

The Little Mermaid: I was so excited to read this book by Hans Christian Anderson because The Little Mermaid was my sister and I's favorite movie growing up. This story is about a sea king that lived deep in the depths of the ocean. Ariel, the youngest of 6 mermaid children was the most beautiful. She longed for a human soul and for the Prince she dreamed of having. When she finally encounters her prince, she has on no clothes, so she wraps herself in her long hair. When he asks her who she is, she realized she cannot speak. She is dumb and cannot sing anymore either. She began to love the Prince, but he saw her as a more of a child than a wife. Without marriage, she wouldn't get to keep her human soul. 

(Illustration by W. Heath Robinson)

Bibliography: Fairy Tales & Stories by Hans Christian Anderson

Reading Notes Week 13: Fairy Tales & Stories by Hans Christian Anderson, Part 1

The Princess and the Pea: When a terrible storm hits, the old King discovers the Princess. He is astonished about her wet, wind blown appearance. As she plants a pea under 20 mattresses in the bed, I am very confused about what she is doing. She wakes up black and blue after feeling the pea under 20 mattresses, showing she is sensitive enough to be a real princess.

The Emperor's New Suit: The Emperor had a new coat for every hour of the day. I feel like I can relate to him because I am obsessed with fashion and buying clothes. He cares so much about what he is wearing and he feels more powerful when he is wearing a great Suit. 

The Brave Tin Soldier: This story is about a group of tin soldiers, all exactly alike, except for one who was made with only one leg. He meets a grand tin soldier women who also only has one leg, but he thinks she is too far out of his league. 

(Illustration by Dulac) 

Bibliography: Fairy Tales and Stories and The Little Mermaid by Hans Christian Anderson

Portfolio Guide

Relentless Love
While grieving her husband Hector's abrupt departure for battle, Andromache comes up with a plan to save their family. She doesn't let anything get in the way of what she wants, and ends up accomplishing more than one person ever thought was imaginable.

OU's New Student
When OU gets an unexpected new student, everyone on campus is excited to see that it's Buddha. He incorporates some of his beliefs into the normal everyday life in Norman, Oklahoma and OU makes a complete turn around.

Iagoo's Adventure
Children love listening to Iagoo's crazy stories. They all seem unbelievable until he proves they are true...

With Brave Wings She Flies
Stella feels there is more to life than what she is experiencing. Her father is in for a surprise when her fate is finally revealed.

Storytelling Week 12: Patience is a Virtue

Patience: "Building a sense of peaceful stability and harmony rather than conflict, hostility, and antagonism; resolving issues and arguments respectfully, as opposed to resorting to anger and fighting." 

"Just be patient, child," said Patience's father. It was about the billionth time he had been told those same three words. Patience was so sick and tired of the wait. He knew there was more to life out there than what he was experiencing in his village and he was determined to find it. Every day, he did the exact same thing. He woke up, ate breakfast, when outside to do work in the yard or fetch food and then came back home to eat dinner with the family. There is no way this was all he was born to do. He wanted to experience life, see new places and meet new people. His parents always told him his time would come, but "when would that be?" he thought.

One day after dinner, Patience's father could tell he was feeling down. He said, "Pat, I have something for you, I've been waiting to give it to you for a long time." He handed him a handheld mirror, decorated with different kinds of jewels. It was heavy and detailed, causing Patience to wonder how he had never come across it before. "What is it?" he asked. The mirror was capable of almost anything. You could tell it what you wanted to see and it would show you. The father demonstrated by saying, show me my wife. The mirror popped up with his wife doing dishes in the kitchen, exactly what she was doing at the very moment. Confused, Patience thanked his father and didn't really know what he was going to do with the mirror.

He sat around for a few days, staring into the mirror. At last, he knew just what he was going to do. He looked into the mirror and said, "Show me where I'm going to be in 10 years." The mirror stirred up a cloud of darkness for a few moments and then the image popped up, clear as day. It was Patience riding a white horse in the pasture of a gigantic, brick castle. The mirror showed him ride the horse to the back porch, where a women and two young kids were sitting watching the sunset. Just like that, at only 16 years old, he walked out of his house and never returned again. The first thing he did was go downtown to find a job and lucked out with a good starting position. He knew he wanted to be able to sustain his family the way the mirror showed he would. He arrived to work every day 2 hours early and stayed after to get ahead of everyone in the department. Over the next few years, he worked his way up to manager and just like the saying goes, hard work pays off. He eventually opened a company of his own. He was thriving at work, not missing the tiny village he came from for a single second.

Sure enough, he was on his lunch break one day and that girl with the wavy hair and sparkling eyes from the mirror walked in the bakery and he said, "There she is."

Bibliography: The Faerie Queene by Edmond Spenser

Patience Information

Author's Note: I read the story of the Faerie Queene by Edmond Spenser this week. It was a very interesting story because it is in the form of an epic poem, one of the longest poems written in English. I decided to change a lot of the characters and the plot of the story to make it my own, but I kept the mirror that could show anything you wanted to see as my main consistent detail with the original story. In the Faerie Queene, the mirror belonged to Britomart's father, and in my story Patience's father gives it to him when he feels he needs it the most. I chose to use the virtue Patience for my story because he represents the characteristic as he waits 16 years to go after the life he wants. Each day, he settled for what he knew he had to do until the timing was just right. In the Faerie Queene, many virtues were represented, but I chose one of my own to demonstrate my character correctly.

Reading Notes Week 12: Faerie Queen, Part 2

This part of the story really stood out to me because of the way characteristics, or virtues were personified. There was danger, doubt, fear, hope, desire, dissembling, suspicion and more. Each one represented the emotion by their expression or the way they were dressed. The entire book is one epic poem, one of the longest poems written in English.

(Photo of the author Edmond Spenser from Wikipedia) 

Bibliography: The Faerie Queene by Edmond Spenser

Reading Notes Week 12: Faerie Queen, Part 1

I like how Sir Guyon and Prince Aurthor's motive is to recover those who have done wrong. I think it is great to see people with power use it for good rather than for evil. In this story, Princess Britomart of South Wales disguises herself as a squire (man of high social standing) to search for Artegall, the champion Knight of Justice. My favorite part of the story was the encounter in the woods with Florimell. I liked the vivid imagery used to describe her and her white pony. I think I want to set my next story in a discreet cabin in the woods. I think it would make for a very mysterious story to have a girl living alone in the woods.

(Photo from: Max Pixel)

Bibliography: The Faerie Queene by Edmond Spenser

Week 11 Storytelling: The Disappearance of Alice

BREAKING NEWS:

(CAM 1) LONDON, ENGLAND-- A young girl by the name of Alice went missing Thursday evening and there has been no sign of her since. She is about 13-years-old, blonde and was last seen wearing a purple dress. Please contact the local police if you have any information on her whereabouts. Her family is frantic to receive any type of information. 

(CAM 2) Alice's mom: We have no idea what could've happened to our little girl. She is about 5 feet tall, but carries herself with poise and confidence as if she were much bigger and older. She is very intelligent and friendly, although she doesn't have many friends of her own. She spends most of her time with her older sister at home since we homeschool them. Alice has a huge imagination and is a very curious girl, so she could really be anywhere by now, it's been three days since we have seen her.

*Alice clicks the TV off and shakes her head*

Alice felt so bad about abandoning her family, but she had every intention to return some day. She didn't even mean to run away, she was just wandering through her garden picking out some of her favorite flowers when she stumbled into a rabbit hole. It turns out it wasn't just any rabbit hole, once she fell in, she plopped to the bottom and found a set of wooden doors, painted with bright, vibrant colors. Of course, instead of climbing out of the hole and returning home, Alice opened them up and walked right through. She was instantly amazed by what she saw. There was a pathway of flat, white rocks, with trees blossoming with pink and purple flowers lining each side. She skipped down the pathway to find a small cottage. She looked around, wondering how a place could be so serene, yet so lively at the same time. "How did I never know any of this was here?" thought Alice. She opened the door of the cottage and found it was filled with everything a normal home would have, but there were animals of all shapes and sizes living inside. She quickly made friends with all of them, although they were frightened of her at first. When she found there was a TV, she kept it going because if her family was seriously in need of her, she was going to return. Until then, she wanted to explore this new little world that caused her curiosity to explode and her mind to overflow with excitement. As she looked around outside, she thought, "This is absolutely wonderful, I think I'll call it Wonderland." In Wonderland, the sky was bluer, the clouds were fluffier and the air was simply easier to breathe. She felt like she was finally home, although she had only been there for a couple days. She connected with each animal on a spiritual level, a cat most of all. She didn't know where her future in Wonderland would take her, but she sure wanted to find out..

(Photo from: Sir John Tenniel)

Bibliography: Alice in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll

Author's Note: I read Alice in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll this week. This has always been a really interesting, but a little confusing story to me. I had actually never read the book before this class, I had only seen the most recent version of the movie. After doing some research about the book, I found out that Lewis Carroll actually had a mental condition that caused him to hallucinate and see things that weren't actually there. The book made a lot more sense to me after realizing he incorporated some of those ideas into his stories. I decided to mix up my version of the story a little bit by introducing it as a news story on TV. Since Alice's family isn't featured a lot in the actual story, I wanted them to play a bigger role in my creation of it. I assume if this was a real situation, the family would be wondering where their daughter went, so I had Alice's mother speaking on the news about her disappearance. Then, I followed up with an explanation about where she was and how she got there. My story focuses a little less on the actual occurrences in Wonderland, to make it more similar to something that could actually happen.

Reading Notes Week 11: Alice In Wonderland, Part 2

At the tea party with the mad hatter, all the characters seem to be very unwelcoming of Alice at first, but she makes her presence known and forcefully includes herself. They are all speaking in unnatural ways and I am very intrigued as to why the Mad Hatter's watch only says the month and not the actual time. Alice is having trouble understanding the way all the other characters say things. I am also left wondering my the Dormouse is sleeping through the entire event. 

(Photo From: Sir John Tenniel)

Bibliography: Alice in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll 

Reading Notes Week 11: Alice in Wonderland, Part 1

In this story, Alice is falling through the mouse hole. She keeps falling and falling, but while she's on her way down, she is able to speak and move. My favorite part about this story is how intellectual and sure of herself Alice is. Her character is very bold and brave for a young girl. She always thinks everything through and doesn't make rash decisions. I have always liked the story of Alice in Wonderland and I would like to write a story with a girl named Alice as the main character. In my version, Alice will probably have more realistic encounters or challenges that she has to endure and be totally confident and able to handle anything. This story has me ready for part 2 so I can read about the tea party.

(Illustration by Sir John Tenniel)

Bibliography: Alice In Wonderland by Lewis Carrol