Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts

Monday, January 23, 2017

Feedback Thoughts

I personally really like both giving and receiving feedback. I like to know what people like and don't like about something, so that I can improve and continue doing things right. I think there are ways for feedback to always be positive, even if you are telling someone an improvement or change they should make. I definitely don't get offended by negative feedback, it may not feel great to hear in the moment, but when you realize the feedback is right and can make you better, it is much easier to accept. Complacency is one of my biggest pet peeves in life and I think feedback is a great way to avoid being complacent with whatever occupies your time. 

"5 Tips for Taking Feedback like a Champ" 
I really liked this article because it was honest and didn't sugar coat the reasons why people should accept feedback. My favorite of the 5 tips was the first one, "Realize that feeling uncomfortable is healthy, normal, and part of the growth process..." I always like to push myself out of my comfort zone, because it helps you grow and improve when you do something you have never done. I often push myself to speak in front of large groups of people because I know that is something I don't really enjoy doing, but the ability to do it often comes in handy. I also push myself out of my comfort zone when it comes to cheerleading because having boys on the team throw me around in new stunts and pyramids can be scary at times, but after you get the first couple tries out of the way, you realize you are capable of more than you thought. 

I loved this article because I am a firm believer that mindset is everything. When you have a positive mindset, everything is better. The voices in your head can be negatives at times, but you have to see the good in every situation. When you let yourself believe you aren't good enough or let others bring your down, you are just bringing yourself down instead of building yourself up. My favorite thing about your mindset is: you have control of it. 

This article was interesting to me because I hadn't thought much about the way I give compliments and how it effects the person I give them to. The article gives examples of ways to phrase compliments for them to be effective, but not boost the persons self esteem TOO much to where they think they are better than everyone else. 

This one is probably my favorite/most effective article out of all the ones I read. Each of the 7 tips were all very useful and helped me learn just how important feedback really is. I knew it was helpful before, but it truly is vital to improving. If you think about if you never got anyone's advice or opinion on what you are doing, how do you know if it is effective and useful? 


(Photo from: Flickr)



Week 2 Storytelling: Relentless Love

Relentless Love

Andromache loved Hector more than she ever thought was possible. He was the son of King Priam and the leader of the Trojan forces. His name and power were very important to many, but she loved him for him. She would have cared for this man just as much if he were poor and powerless. They dreamt of spending their life together raising a family and exploring the world together, but as the leader of the Trojans, Hector couldn’t focus all of his attention on the lovely, but a bit high strung, Andromache. As time went on, the couple had their ups and downs, but for the most part they had a strong, happy relationship. The two spent all the time they could together and eventually had a baby boy. Hector loved his little son more than anything in the world. They were like two peas in a pod. I don’t think the boy could’ve been any more like Hector even if he tried. Andromache loved to watch them spend time together. Her heart throbbed at the sight of Hector with their precious child.
One day, there was trouble with the Greeks and all the Trojan soldiers geared up for battle. Each time Hector had to go fight the Greeks, Andromache would get worried sick about him. She would even travel to the top of a nearby building and watch the fights happen, just to make sure she was there if anything were to happen to her husband. As usual, she watched from her spot and hurried home when the fighting ended so her husband would think she had never left the house when he arrived back.

When he returned home, he had a grim look on his face.

“What’s wrong? I thought today went well?” Andromache asked.

“I’m afraid I have some bad news,” Hector replied, “It looks like I’m going to have to leave for a while.”

“What?!” Andromache shrieked. “How long do you mean, Hector? You can’t leave me here with our son, take us with you!”

“I’m afraid I can’t. I think you two will be safer here. The Greeks are relentless and they won’t stop until they are satisfied. I know they will attack wherever I am, and I don’t want my family to be harmed.”

            Andromache cried herself to sleep that night, and every night for what seemed like eternity. She knew she had to do something about it; she wanted the life she had dreamed of with her family. As soon as Hector left, she began plotting what she was going to do to make sure the Greeks stayed away from the Trojans so her husband could come back. She knew her husband wouldn’t leave the forces because they didn’t stand a chance without him.

            She took matters into her own hands.

            First, she figured out what exactly the Greeks wanted. They wanted the city that she lived in, but obviously she couldn’t agree to give away the place so many people resided. So, she thought of a backup option. There was a neighboring town, just a few miles away, with not much civilization at all. She had a plan now, and would stop at nothing to make sure she was successful. She wanted to build up the abandoned city with houses and all the other places people needed to live off of. She wanted all of her friends to help pitch in to building this new town… and she was going to give it to the Greeks so the Trojans could have their life and safety back in their own city. It wasn’t going to be easy, but with everyone in the city there to help, she knew it would be possible.
            Sure enough, after just a few weeks around 20 houses had been completed. After that, they kept building more and more until there were hundreds. They were so proud of all that they had accomplished they didn’t want to stop. They built tons of places and after only 6 months, the city was a place worth living. Instead of telling her husband what she had accomplished, she went straight to the grounds the Greeks were staying in, and told their leader she built them a city. At first he was furious, they didn’t want any old city; he just wanted what the Trojans had. But she convinced him to at least come look at it. To her surprise, he was quite satisfied and agreed to move his people there!

            Andromache was so excited to tell her husband the news. When she got to the location of the battle, she explained to him everything she had done. He cried tears of joy and she felt so proud, she had never seen him so emotional before. All of the troops praised her and thanked her and they built her the most beautiful palace anyone had ever seen to show their gratitude to her. She proved that anything was possible and her husband thought more highly of her than ever. Hector finally realized she was much more strong and determined than the weak, sensitive woman he saw her as before.


The palace Andromache earned for her family after solving all the problems between the Greeks and Trojans.

(Photo by: Flickr)

Bibliography: Homer's Iliad- "Hector and Andromache" by A.J. Church.

Author's Note: I read the story "Hector and Andromache" from Homer's Iliad in my Week 2 reading assignment and I really enjoyed it. It gave me the inspiration to make up a new story about the relationship Hector and Andromache had. It was clear in the original story that Andromache truly loved Hector, so I used the same characters and some of the same information from the story to recreate it in a new way. I wanted to put my own spin on it, so I made the wife the hero, which is unique because stories often give men all the power. I thought it would be inspiring to have a women accomplish so much, even though no one really believed in her. My story is meant to portray the idea that anything is possible if you set your mind to it and don't doubt yourself. Andromache is able to prove to Hector just how much she is capable of by using her emotions as fuel in her plan and ends up never having to worry about being underestimated ever again. The message this story sends is more important than the actual story itself.

Reading Notes: Homer's Iliad Part B

Reading Notes Part B:
"The Rousing of Achilles": This quote from the story really stood out to me. "As a lioness stands before its cubs and will not suffer the hunter to take them, so did Ajax stand before the body of Patroclus and defend it from the Trojans." In the story, the warrior Petroclus is killed and Achilles wants his arms. I liked how the story ended with a cliffhanger, it made me want to know what happened next.
"The Slaying of Hector": The part of this story that stood out to me the most was after Hector dies, Achilles pierces his ankle bones and drags his body to the ships. The story is about the war between the Greeks and the Trojans and all of the issues between Achilles and Hector leading up to his death. 
"The Ransoming of Hector": Unlike Patroclus, Hector's body was treated very poorly after his death. Zeus tells King Priam to buy Hector's body from Achilles. The story was concluded with a compromise between the King and Achilles to be at truce for 9 days leading up to Hector's funeral.

This photo depicts Hector's dead body being dragged behind a horse and carriage driven by Achilles. 

(Photo by: Homer's Iliad by A.J. Church- "The Ransoming of Hector"


Bibliography:
Homer's Lliad by A.J. Church

Sunday, January 22, 2017

Reading Notes: Homer's lliad, Part A

In the story "The Quarrel" there is a big problem with the girl, Chryseis and the cities of Troy and Chryse. Eventually, the girl is taken away, but Agammemnon wants her back. Achilles is mad and doesn't want to follow Agammemnon's word.
The story "What Thetis did for her Son" starts with Thetis praying to Zeus for honour for her son Achilles. Then, Zeus's wife Hera gets in a big fight with him about keeping secrets from her. He basically tells her that she doesn't need to know everything he is doing when it isn't always her business. I think it would be fun to recreate this story into some kind of drama between Zeus, Hera and Thetis.
In Hector and Andromache, Andromache says she would want to die if she loses Hector because Achilles has killed everyone else she loved and cared about. I think it would also be fun to recreate this story and Hector and Andromache would seek revenge on Achilles.
As I read all of Part 1, I realize it is becoming hard to differentiate all the different characters that are being introduced. I am very unfamiliar with any of the Greek Gods but I am enjoying learning about all of them and what they are for.

This photo depicts Andromache falling to the ground after Achilles stabs and kills her husband Hector. 

(Photo by Homer's Iliad by A.J. Church- "The Slaying of Hector")

Bibliography:
Homer's Iliad by A.J. Church- Link